Reviewed by Justine B. (age 8)
I liked the funny part when his mom turned to chocolate. Another humorous part was when the trumpet turned to chocolate because of the funny sound the trumpet made. Another part that I liked was the part when the water and the apples turned to chocolate at Susan's birthday party. John had a bad day because every thing was going wrong. I like chocolate. This story makes me dream of chocolate.
I think everybody in my whole family should read it because it funny and crazy things happened to John.