Reviewed by Ammar A (age 9)
I think the author should have put in pictures in this book, because sometimes I didn't understand a part. I needed a picture to help me understand what was happening. I liked how the author changed the setting, because the author used a lot of settings. I think the story was pretty well written, because details are what make your story better and the author used good details. Sometimes I can picture what is happening, because the author used such good details.
The book reminds me of my brother because he skips to the phone like Skipper skips. I think the author described the characters using "slow down the moment" and "show don't tell" details. One example of this was 'the Masked Mutant melted fast and just turned into a breeze and flew away." Skipper had many expressions, because he was always quick and a little bit impatient.
I recommend this book to people who like to read Goosebumps and scary stories. It is definitely scary!