Reviewed by Brett H (age 10)
My favorite part was when John became annoyed with his parents. This story reminds me of my life and the crazy addiction I have to candy like John has with chocolate. The character I liked in the book was the candy store guy because he is like scheemming behind John's back. The special thing I get from this book is that I can have a craving for chocolate and it won't totally ruin my life if I don't eat too much of it.
I recommend this book to kids who love chocolate because it is a funny book about chocolate. If you like chocolate you're going to love this book. The thing that might interest readers is that it has a special, magical thing in it which you will discover on your own when you read.