Mr. McCready's Cleaning Day

Written by Tracey Shilling • Illustrated by Stephen Michael King

Reviewed by Kyara E. (age 7)

The story was about a man cleaning up his house without wearing his glasses. He vacummed up his mouse and cat and dog. At the end the vacuum bag exploded and the animals and dirt went flying all over his house.

I liked this story because it made me laugh. It is silly to think a man would really vacuum up animals. It was fun to see the vacuum blow up and see all the animals come out of the bag.

I recommend this story to other kids because it made me laugh. I liked how the man did silly things by vacuuming up animals instead of dirt.

Kyara E. is a student in Mrs. Swain's 1st Grade Class
2004-2005