Reviewed by Sammy.F (age 11)
Starkiller goes out to find his old freind and Rahm Kota is now a prisoner on the planet Cato Neimoida. When Starkiller gets there, he finds otu that Kota is in a big pit and frees him. Then they find out htat Jano was taken to the planet Kemono and Starkiller goes there to free him.
When Starkiller and Kota get to Kamono, they call the rebel alliances and attack the heart of the empire. When Starkiller is on the platform, he sees Juno who is being held by Vader. Starkiller jumps up over Vader and loses his second light saber. After freeing Juno, the rebels capture Vader. At the end of the story, Starkiller finds out that he is not a clone.
I would have changed the story so that Starkiller doesn't lose his second light saber because he looks cooler with it. My favorite part is when the rebels attack Kamono and capture Vader because he is a bad guy. My favorite character is Starkiller becasue he has over the top power and he can unleash it whenever he wants to. My least favorite character is Darth Vader because he does very bad things to Starkiller.
This story doesn't relate to my life but I love it anyway. There aren't any pictures, but I wish there were. I think others should read this story because it has a great plot and it is exciting and unpredictable.