Reviewed by Linzey S. (age 11)
They also discover that Sirius was the one who took Nevilleís paper with the password and that Professor Lupin becomes a werewolf at only a full moon. Sirius tries to convince Lupin as a werewolf to not harm them, but instead gets attacked and badly injured. Harry sees Sirius lying at the edge of a pond and the pond freezes as dementors comes. The dementors try to suck Harry and Siriusís souls as a patronus scares them away. As Harry sees a deer, the Patronus, he sees Mr. Potter, his father. When he awakens, Hermione and Ron tell him that they took Sirius into a locked chamber and his soul will be sucked out of him. Dumbledore is told by them that Sirius is a good guy and he tells Hermione to twist her necklace three times. He goes out of the hospital wing and Hermione obeys with Harry at her side. They free Buck Beak, Hagrids giant half-horse and half-bird friend, and help Sirius escape from Hogwarts from the dementors to safety.
I would have changed something in the story. I would have kept Hagrid as a teacher because I think Malfoy did that on purpose to get rid of Hagrid. My favorite part is when Harry uses a spell on Aunt Marge because I think she deserves it for being lazy and making Harry do stuff for her. My favorite character is Harry because he is so heroic and doesnít want anybody to get hurt. My least favorite character is either Peter Pettigrew or Voldemort because they both give me the shivers and they are trying to murder courageous and brave Harry Potter.
This story doesnít relate to my life because I donít have a wand or an owl. I wish to, but canít go to Hogwarts. This story has pictures with each character and it helps me because I know on chapter one that Aunt Marge will get all puffed up. I think others should read this story because it might help them to realize how hard it is without your parents and you always need their love to get out of danger.